Today just didn't feel right. I felt as if something was going to go wrong.
"Cough, Cough."
What a great way to start off the day, knowing my mom is sick. In between coughs she managed to squeak out,
"Cough, Cough."
What a great way to start off the day, knowing my mom is sick. In between coughs she managed to squeak out,
“Cody, can you please go get me some medicine?”
I go and grab my bike. Right as I reach the street I see a police with a gun in hand tackling this man. But later that day I saw that exact man on the news. "Well, at least he got caught,” I say to myself relieved.
Your story was pretty good, but maybe use some powerful words in your story, but, good job!
ReplyDeletegood detailed story I see you got some inspiration but you for got the prompt
ReplyDeleteGood story but your spacing for you speaking parts or off. Also you might want to change "I saw a police" to "I saw police." And the "cough," "cough" needs to have its on line.
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