Stairway Denied
I have always love where I live. There's a lot of nice kids, good weather, nice houses, and most of all the beaches! Every day I walk home on the beach the same thing every day. Until I saw the biggest floating stair set ever. I walked up the first few stairs, hesitated, and turned around I would love to climb it but I remembered it was tuna Tuesday at my house. It was only 3 o'clock I climbed as much as I could until I had to race down and go home
Your story is sick very descriptive language. Tuna Tuesday hype
ReplyDeleteI really like the humor in you're story But I think "tuna Tuesday" should be "Tuna Tuesday"
ReplyDeleteOk, interesting story. You need a period at the end of your last sentence. Also, you could make your first sentence stronger with finding a better word then 'love'.
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