Thursday 14 April 2016

week 13 100WC

My heart was racing as the news was informing us that a meteorite was going hit earth at approximately 12:30 pm  and we were watching the 10:00 am news. Right away I ran outside to see if this theory was true. I thought I saw something grey ish red coming toward us. I didn't believe it was a meteor but the spot just grew and grew. My life was over there was no way of living. Until, I remembered it was April 1st which is April fools. The KCBC news pranked all of Kentucky. When I remembered it was april fool i doubted it but they had also just announced it.
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  1. Albert Einstein 2914 April 2016 at 13:53

    Your story is really creative. You have minor punctuation errors that can be easily be fixed. Good story.

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  2. Unknown14 April 2016 at 13:56

    Your story was really good. But in your story there is a "I" you need to capitalize. And, there are some sentences you need comma in like: My life was over "," there was no way of living. And, i don't think we need to know if the news was at AM. And the first sentence doesn't make sense, which is: My heart was racing as the news was informing us that a meteorite was GOING HIT. I think it's suppose to be "was going TO hit.

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